Post by Queen~Tigeress on Mar 7, 2009 15:14:10 GMT -5
Ok, here's my shot at a spoof story. Just to get everyone's attention, I'm going to list everyone's name who is in it: Ender, Tigeress, Corran, Lancer, MasterJedi, ewok, gannar, falken. The setting takes place in modern times/middle ages/Post Columbian times/whenever.
Oh btw most of this is coming from the "what do you think about a name" thread. And a little bit of my own observations.
Scene 1: Jedi Castle
The Narrorator is suffering from a incurable symptom of lack of creativity, and is thus requesting the reader to just take a tall tower and make it all gloomy and scary.
Stale Cookie crawls up the circling stairs in what to most people would consider to be an overexaggeratingly heroic effort. But if people knew his character and his abilities, and what he had previously gone through, they would still think that he was crawling up the stairs in an exaggeratingly heroic effort, trying to gain the sympathy of the reader. He reaches the top, stretches his hand to the door, opens it, and then stands up as if he had just had a energy boost, angry at the stupid narrorator for making the readers not feel sorry for him.
In the center of the room, with 4 stacks of books surrounding him, and wearing glasses that look as if they could pick up radar, Lord.Ender the Hegemon was taking notes and reading a horrifyingly large book on Socrates. He didn't so much as look up from his work at Lancer's.....um...arrival.
Stale Cookie shouted, "SITH IS ATTACKING THE JEDI REALM!"
Ender: Not now, I'm busy trying to decifer the 12 dimensions..
Lancer: HE'S BURNING TOWNS AND VILLAGES ALL ALONG THE BORDERS!!!"
Ender: *muttering to self*...I've almost got it, the secret to the very existance of mankind....
Lancer: HE'S KILLED MANY OF OUR SOLDIERS! HE'S ALREADY CUT OFF OUR LINE OF COOKIE SUPPLIES *begins to cry*
Ender::...Dualism has proven concise in every aspect of the materialistc world: conception and termination, amelioration and stagnation, but what of the next dimension....?
Lancer: oh by the way he called you a chicken.
At this pont the eyeglasses on Ender's face would have
shattered, if they had had any lens in them.
"WTF, that NOOB CALL ME A CHICKEN? THIS IS WAR! I'LL KILL THAT NOOB JUST FOR CONSIDERING CALLING ME A CHICKEN!!!!!! I'LL....."
As Lord.Ender the Hegemon rants on, Stale Cookie begins to look at a doorway. He begins to jump up and down and gets a very hungry look on his face.
Lancer: um...
Ender:....BURN HIM AT THE STAKE....
Lancer: errr....
Ender: ...WANT HIM TO DIE SLOWLY...
Lancer: daaaaaaaa
Ender: ...WILL PERSONALLY SET THE FIRE IN HIS FLESH...
Lancer: Lord.Ender the Hegemon!!!!
Ender: WHAT? Oh, fine, go ahead
By the time Lord.Ender the Hegemon had said "fine," there was already a hole the size of Stale Cookie (about 2 feet) in the doorway that Stale Cookie had been looking at, and through that hole could be seen Stale Cookie swimming through a large pool of 10 year old cookies.
Pause
"Hmmm." Lord.Ender the Hegemon said not so thoughtfully, "I think I'll put on my wizard's robes disappear for a couple of weeks so I can be all mysterious and people will wonder where I am so then I can make a heroic and epic entrance during some random moment." puts on the robes and flys out the window, knocking out an unexpected ewok who fell on Falken, making him paranoid of teddy bears ever since.
Scene II: QRA Castle
On request of narrorater, just make a castle with pretty flowers and fairies in it.
"WTH AGAIN?!" yells tigeress as she once again loses her queen to Lord.Corran in a classic game of chess. Lord.Corran only smiled, shrugged, and waited her turn so he could pwn her again.
Suddenly she sighed, "Corran, can you get me something from the fridge? I'm hungry." Lord.Corran silently slips away from the table and heads to the fridge. He opens it and finds ewok inside sitting in a lawn chair with sunglasses and flip flops, drink in hand. Lord.Corran yells, "You want some ewok?" "Aren't we saving it for dinner?" Replied Tigeress. Lord.Corran shrugged and grabebd a sandwich instead, along with a coke for himself. Tigeress yells, "I DON'T WANT THAT!" Lord.Corran sighs and goes back to the fridge, digging through.
Tigeress in the mean time rearranges the chessboard that conveniently places her pieces to take out corran's queen. When Lord.Corran comes back, he sits down and opens his coke.
After a quick glance at the cheessboard, Lord.Corran says amusingly
"Last move my king was on this side of the board, now it's on the other side of the board, I wonder how that happened." He then holds up a sign with the facial expression: ^.^. The fridge opens and pops out a sign: "ROFL Ow3d."
"Your move," says Tigeress, "You have no hope of winning this time Lord.Corran."
Lord.Corran looks at the board for a couple of seconds, moves a pawn, then states, "checkmate." Ewok holds up a sign that says, "Ender likes eggs."
"YOU....YOU!!!!" slaps Lord.Corran. Puts hands to to mouth, "OH I'M SO SORRY Lord.Corran! I DIDN'T MEAN TO!"
"Yes, I'm sure you were just intending to swipe away a fly on the chessboard." Tigeress puts on a michevious expression.
"One more game, I promise this'll be the last."
"That's what you said 2 games ago."
"I need to develop a new strategy..." At this point the narrorator laughs at tigeress for reasons unknown to the reader.
"That's what you said 4 games ago..."
"I order you to play one more game with me!"
"Um, ok i gtg AFK."
"Wth, you can't go AFK, this is the real world....hey wtf where'd you go?! You were just here! Oh well" Goes to check QRA forums on computer.
MasterJedi bursts through the door, "YOUR MAJESTY, SITH IS ATTACKING THE JEDI REALM!"
Tigeress turns her head, "does that include us?"
"umm....err...well yeah I think so..."
"Omg, "Lord.EnderTheHegemon?" the arrogance of the man!" Giggles to herself.
"SITH IS ONLY A FEW DAYS AWAY FROM THIS VERY CASTLE!!!!"
"Let's see how he likes being called Zorry, ROFL".
"HE'S ALREADY DESTROYED THE STATUE OF THE FOUNDER DARKKNIGHT!"
"OW!!" cries tigeress
"OMG TIGERESS ARE YOU OK? ARE YOU HURT?"
"I broke a nail" whimpers tigeress.
"9111!!!!! SOMEONE CALLL 911!!!!!"
"Oh wait nvm it was just my cell phone, snapped in half, wasn't my nail." MasterJedi sighs in relief.
"Oh yeah, Sith has also destroyed the monument dedicated to Tchdwn the conqueror."
"Good riddance" says tigeress as she get's another cell phone from the drawer, "Now I can scream and be frustrated all I want without him coming back from the grave and making truthful comments on how much I scream and get frustrated."
"Anything that will please you my Queen."
"Oh look, Corran's posted something funny about Gannar's post..."
"Oh yeah Sith thinks you're a little white sissy girl."
Computer, cellphone, and Corran's coke shatter. "WTF THE NOOB THINKS I'M A LITTLE WHITE SISSY GIRL HOW DARE HE I SHALL SLAP HIM MYSELF MAKE HIM WISH HE'D NEVER BEEN BORN I....!!!!
"My queen?"
"...BLACK AND PROUD OF MY HERITAGE....."
"Um, My lady?"
"...DISCRIMINATION! I SHALL HAVE Lord.Ender the Hegemon OR Lord.Corran...."
"Queen?"
"....UNTIL HE GET'S RED IN THE FACE...."
"MY QUEEN!"
"WHAT?!?!!??!?!?!?!?!"
"Remember your blood pressure."
"Oh, I broke a nail..."
Oh btw most of this is coming from the "what do you think about a name" thread. And a little bit of my own observations.
Scene 1: Jedi Castle
The Narrorator is suffering from a incurable symptom of lack of creativity, and is thus requesting the reader to just take a tall tower and make it all gloomy and scary.
Stale Cookie crawls up the circling stairs in what to most people would consider to be an overexaggeratingly heroic effort. But if people knew his character and his abilities, and what he had previously gone through, they would still think that he was crawling up the stairs in an exaggeratingly heroic effort, trying to gain the sympathy of the reader. He reaches the top, stretches his hand to the door, opens it, and then stands up as if he had just had a energy boost, angry at the stupid narrorator for making the readers not feel sorry for him.
In the center of the room, with 4 stacks of books surrounding him, and wearing glasses that look as if they could pick up radar, Lord.Ender the Hegemon was taking notes and reading a horrifyingly large book on Socrates. He didn't so much as look up from his work at Lancer's.....um...arrival.
Stale Cookie shouted, "SITH IS ATTACKING THE JEDI REALM!"
Ender: Not now, I'm busy trying to decifer the 12 dimensions..
Lancer: HE'S BURNING TOWNS AND VILLAGES ALL ALONG THE BORDERS!!!"
Ender: *muttering to self*...I've almost got it, the secret to the very existance of mankind....
Lancer: HE'S KILLED MANY OF OUR SOLDIERS! HE'S ALREADY CUT OFF OUR LINE OF COOKIE SUPPLIES *begins to cry*
Ender::...Dualism has proven concise in every aspect of the materialistc world: conception and termination, amelioration and stagnation, but what of the next dimension....?
Lancer: oh by the way he called you a chicken.
At this pont the eyeglasses on Ender's face would have
shattered, if they had had any lens in them.
"WTF, that NOOB CALL ME A CHICKEN? THIS IS WAR! I'LL KILL THAT NOOB JUST FOR CONSIDERING CALLING ME A CHICKEN!!!!!! I'LL....."
As Lord.Ender the Hegemon rants on, Stale Cookie begins to look at a doorway. He begins to jump up and down and gets a very hungry look on his face.
Lancer: um...
Ender:....BURN HIM AT THE STAKE....
Lancer: errr....
Ender: ...WANT HIM TO DIE SLOWLY...
Lancer: daaaaaaaa
Ender: ...WILL PERSONALLY SET THE FIRE IN HIS FLESH...
Lancer: Lord.Ender the Hegemon!!!!
Ender: WHAT? Oh, fine, go ahead
By the time Lord.Ender the Hegemon had said "fine," there was already a hole the size of Stale Cookie (about 2 feet) in the doorway that Stale Cookie had been looking at, and through that hole could be seen Stale Cookie swimming through a large pool of 10 year old cookies.
Pause
"Hmmm." Lord.Ender the Hegemon said not so thoughtfully, "I think I'll put on my wizard's robes disappear for a couple of weeks so I can be all mysterious and people will wonder where I am so then I can make a heroic and epic entrance during some random moment." puts on the robes and flys out the window, knocking out an unexpected ewok who fell on Falken, making him paranoid of teddy bears ever since.
Scene II: QRA Castle
On request of narrorater, just make a castle with pretty flowers and fairies in it.
"WTH AGAIN?!" yells tigeress as she once again loses her queen to Lord.Corran in a classic game of chess. Lord.Corran only smiled, shrugged, and waited her turn so he could pwn her again.
Suddenly she sighed, "Corran, can you get me something from the fridge? I'm hungry." Lord.Corran silently slips away from the table and heads to the fridge. He opens it and finds ewok inside sitting in a lawn chair with sunglasses and flip flops, drink in hand. Lord.Corran yells, "You want some ewok?" "Aren't we saving it for dinner?" Replied Tigeress. Lord.Corran shrugged and grabebd a sandwich instead, along with a coke for himself. Tigeress yells, "I DON'T WANT THAT!" Lord.Corran sighs and goes back to the fridge, digging through.
Tigeress in the mean time rearranges the chessboard that conveniently places her pieces to take out corran's queen. When Lord.Corran comes back, he sits down and opens his coke.
After a quick glance at the cheessboard, Lord.Corran says amusingly
"Last move my king was on this side of the board, now it's on the other side of the board, I wonder how that happened." He then holds up a sign with the facial expression: ^.^. The fridge opens and pops out a sign: "ROFL Ow3d."
"Your move," says Tigeress, "You have no hope of winning this time Lord.Corran."
Lord.Corran looks at the board for a couple of seconds, moves a pawn, then states, "checkmate." Ewok holds up a sign that says, "Ender likes eggs."
"YOU....YOU!!!!" slaps Lord.Corran. Puts hands to to mouth, "OH I'M SO SORRY Lord.Corran! I DIDN'T MEAN TO!"
"Yes, I'm sure you were just intending to swipe away a fly on the chessboard." Tigeress puts on a michevious expression.
"One more game, I promise this'll be the last."
"That's what you said 2 games ago."
"I need to develop a new strategy..." At this point the narrorator laughs at tigeress for reasons unknown to the reader.
"That's what you said 4 games ago..."
"I order you to play one more game with me!"
"Um, ok i gtg AFK."
"Wth, you can't go AFK, this is the real world....hey wtf where'd you go?! You were just here! Oh well" Goes to check QRA forums on computer.
MasterJedi bursts through the door, "YOUR MAJESTY, SITH IS ATTACKING THE JEDI REALM!"
Tigeress turns her head, "does that include us?"
"umm....err...well yeah I think so..."
"Omg, "Lord.EnderTheHegemon?" the arrogance of the man!" Giggles to herself.
"SITH IS ONLY A FEW DAYS AWAY FROM THIS VERY CASTLE!!!!"
"Let's see how he likes being called Zorry, ROFL".
"HE'S ALREADY DESTROYED THE STATUE OF THE FOUNDER DARKKNIGHT!"
"OW!!" cries tigeress
"OMG TIGERESS ARE YOU OK? ARE YOU HURT?"
"I broke a nail" whimpers tigeress.
"9111!!!!! SOMEONE CALLL 911!!!!!"
"Oh wait nvm it was just my cell phone, snapped in half, wasn't my nail." MasterJedi sighs in relief.
"Oh yeah, Sith has also destroyed the monument dedicated to Tchdwn the conqueror."
"Good riddance" says tigeress as she get's another cell phone from the drawer, "Now I can scream and be frustrated all I want without him coming back from the grave and making truthful comments on how much I scream and get frustrated."
"Anything that will please you my Queen."
"Oh look, Corran's posted something funny about Gannar's post..."
"Oh yeah Sith thinks you're a little white sissy girl."
Computer, cellphone, and Corran's coke shatter. "WTF THE NOOB THINKS I'M A LITTLE WHITE SISSY GIRL HOW DARE HE I SHALL SLAP HIM MYSELF MAKE HIM WISH HE'D NEVER BEEN BORN I....!!!!
"My queen?"
"...BLACK AND PROUD OF MY HERITAGE....."
"Um, My lady?"
"...DISCRIMINATION! I SHALL HAVE Lord.Ender the Hegemon OR Lord.Corran...."
"Queen?"
"....UNTIL HE GET'S RED IN THE FACE...."
"MY QUEEN!"
"WHAT?!?!!??!?!?!?!?!"
"Remember your blood pressure."
"Oh, I broke a nail..."